I sent this to another viscom student to get first draft feedback. I explained that the writing saying ‘Tiger Girl’ was not what it will actually say, it was just to see the image with some text. He gave me the feedback that the font was a little too bold and took away from the illustration itself. Plus said it made it seem a bit ‘Topshop’ which is exactly what I wouldn’t want it to look like! I’m going to try another, more delicate font.

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